This is a really fun exercise and really funny joke. I think staging it differently though will really pull the joke off even stronger. Instead of straight up and down, what if we were in slightly more, the head is on the left side of the composition with the ball at the same height but more over to the right. (geez this takes forever to say with words). Basically what this could do is allow the viewer an easier way to take in the info of the head, then the ball and create some really great eye movement too. just an idea cause you asked for feedback.
Thanks James great feedback! I think I'm gonna rework the idea with that staging in mind.
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